I should have put more Character Development in my presentation like albert getting bullied or Ally helping Travis when Ally figured out that he has Dyslexia, Or Ally and Keisha dropping there flowers when they were about to sing in an assembly, I really should have put ally giving mrs. halls a sympathy card (beacuse it had a nice flower on it).

I would like this book to end by ally learning how to read and for her to overcome the bullying , beacuse I think that she really wants to learn to read and she needs to belive that she is not stupid. Albert should tell those boys that are bulling him to stop it, beacuse albert should'nt be bullied by kids that are younger than him.