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1/11/2016

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my minecraft house

  is beneath a little lake that I made to go with my ocean theme and beside that lake is my village with about 20 villagers and about 30 houses, above the village is the small floating island that I made if you look left from my house on the is land you can see beluga bakery and kid castle ,beluga bakery is both a bakery filled with delicious sweets ,and a farm filled with all the crops you could imagine, but kid castle is a small castle made of cobblestone and wood then if you go left from the area were you can see kid castle from the floating island you can see the candy cane forest(a Christmas thing that I made but it looks so good that i`m going to keep it)
then next to the candy cane forest is my old house (at the moment a storage house) and underneath that house are some small automatic farms and finally to the other side of the candy cane forest is my redstoner for hire shop (were i either can build redstone devices for someonr or tutor them in redstone (or both)). 
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Ms. Bains
1/11/2016 10:55:10 am

Well done writing using order of location to organize your writing. Please remember to add punctuation in your writing. Try re-reading out loud to your self before posting. Thank you for sharing about Minecraft House.

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Mom
1/21/2016 08:43:58 pm

Great writing son!!
Punctuation helps me (the reader) to know when to pause to reflect on your ideas. I love your ideas and I wish you could tutor me in Redstone :p

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